Bel's Dream Final
In this interactive game, Bel meets with his childhood friend in the woods outside their home a few weeks before Leo will be attending school out of the city.
| Status | Released |
| Platforms | HTML5 |
| Author | ness-ofthe-loch |
| Genre | Visual Novel |
| Made with | Twine |
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This was such a successful piece of storytelling that drew me in slowly and left me feeling soft sadness. I think you utilized twine in a way that worked as a story-telling medium and succeeding in that endeavor. The background images were lovely and really helped set the tone and environment of the dialogue. I think with a few sound effects like crickets or gentle wind, the atmosphere of this piece would really sing. Great job!
I find the game really engaging and entertaining. The story is cute and sad at the same time. To give the game a bit more spices, I think you can try varying the position of the texts and their sizes. Overall, the game is very straight forward and moody.
OH NOOOO this made me tear up. this is super sweet and so immersive, especially with the backgrounds!! it's like i'm there aah... wow! i really like the fantasy in here. it's not high fantasy but it isn't just magic either. there's enough context to give an idea of the character without telling everything.
the ending--owie!!! the writing is really great throughout the game and i think the ending could use just a little more! maybe delve deeper into bel's thoughts.
looking forward to more!